hassna31
bonjour à toute et à tous, je vais bientôt passer mon bac l et j'aimerai que vous me corriger mes faute, Merci d'avance pour votre aide. voici ma notion concernant la LVA(anglais):
Space and exchange:« living together in Britain »
I'm going to talk about the notion Spaces and exchanges. first, I will to give a definition the notion space and exchange. The different spaces of the world are nowadays more and more connected to each other. The exchanges can appear on many forms: people, trade, information .i will illustrated this notion troughs example of multiculturalism in Great Britain and more exactly I would speak about asians’ integration in great Britain. British-Asians are person is someone of Indian, Pakistani, or Bangladeshi origin who reside in the United Kingdom.
First we will see the multicultural dimension où nous allons voir a quoi elle est dû. Secondly we will see the positive aspect of double culture and then we will see the negative aspect of double culture.
The multiculturalism in Britain is due dû to his history. In XIX siècle, great Britain build an colonial and colonized Asia mainly l’Asie including India. Nowadays, there are still the British influence in the country like Bangladesh or India. This situation can explain the strong migration that England has undergoes. Indeed, part of immigrant which lives in England are from Asia that is India asiatique c’est-a-dire, Indiens et cetera
in class we have studied a document which is a table with the origins of the British immigration from 1951 to 2011. In 1951, one 152 thousand Polish people against 111 thousand people who are immigrated in England; and in 2011, 579 thousand Polish people against 694 thousand people who is immigrated in England. the Indian community increased though the years and reached a high point in 2011, becoming the most important immigration in Britain. Perhaps the number increases because of the indolence of India.
They are a picture (that’s here) which illustrated perfectly the multiculturalism in England. In this picture we can see a brutish-asians couple with a fish and chips, in front of a fast food. The women is wearing a traditional suit. In this picture, they are blending the British culture with the asian culture. The fact that women wether dressed like a traditional suit and having fish and chips that is the national dish it represent a double culture. Indeed, Britain breed several cultures; especially the Asian culture. In class we had studied a document which is an interview between a journalist and a woman called Fatima. Fatima has 28 years old and she is teacher. Fatima is born in Birmingham, where she lives nowadays. Her parents came from Bangladesh. First, it was her father who came in Britain to work, to have a better life and better way of life; and after her mother immigrated. Britain and Bangladesh have a good link because of the colony. For Fatima, having a double culture is a blessing for her because she gets the best of both worlds.
In this multiculturalism, they are a positive aspect. the double cultures bring a certain wealth and benefits. In fact, have a double culture enables us, to be tolerant towards of the other and have a larger knowledge. Having a double culture involves to be bilingual. despite that many people find that it’s really well to having a double culture.
The movie Bend it like Beckham dealing with the integration and adaptation of people coming from foreign country. This movie highlight un aspect plus dépréciatif de la double culture. in fact, the movie bend it like Beckham talk about the situation of a young asian-brutish, named Jasminder, who is a huge fan of the David Beckham and hopes that one day she will be able to become a professional footballer and play for her country. But, their parent are orthodox sick and have have other ideas for the future. in fact, for them Jasminder is expected as a woman to be married and maternal. the director Guinder Chada uses different techniques which illustrated the conflict of culture, such as accent in voice, contraste, stereotypes, sarcasm and characterization. In class we have a also studied a document which is website article presenting a testimony about the identity crisis that British-Asians encounter. the author suggests that they have difficulties to involve themselves in the culture of their country of origin. They have to celebrate their parent’s counties and to attend traditional anemones because they insist on their cultural heritage. She mention the wares integration and adaptation.
To conclude, we can say that England is absolute cosmopolitan country, where the British-Asian are integrated to British society. We can also say, that double cultures is a blessing because this double culture bring a avantage to fulfillment giving (en donnant) the best of both world. But, having a double cultures can be destabilizing for a part of Bristish-Asians because the tradition of parents collide with the lifestyle of the land where they lives. So, there are a good and bad side in the multiculturalism, it’s necessary maybe to take just the best for live well
fidji45
Bonsoir Hassna 31
Je vous propose de corriger les fautes les plus évidentes sur le fond comme la forme ,OK
J'ai eu "peur" quand vous avez dit que l'Angleterre avait colonisé l'ASIE (les Chinois sont-ils au courant? :) ) Tenons nous en à L'Inde qui sera ensuite divisée en Inde et Pakistan après l'indépendance 1947.
Space and exchange:« living together in Britain »: il faudrait soulever un question ,pas mettre une sorte de "titre"EX HAVING A DOUBLE CULTURE IN GREAT BRITAIN :A CHANCE OR A DRAWBACK?
I'm going to talk about the notionOF Spaces and exchanges. First, I will to give a definition OF the notion OF space and exchange. The different spaces of the world are nowadays more and more connected to each other. The exchanges TAKE on many forms: people, trade, information .I will illustrated this notion troughs exampleS of multiculturalism in Great Britain BY TAKING THE EXAMPLES OF BRITISH PEOPLE WHO HAVE PAKISTANI OR BANGLADESHI ORIGINS. I would LIKE TO speak about asians’(???) integration in Great Britain. British-Asians are PEOPLE THAT COME FROM INDIA , PAKISTAN AND BANGLADESH AND who reside in the United Kingdom.
First we will see the multicultural dimension où nous allons voir a quoi elle est dû AND SEE WHERE IT TAKES ITS ROOTS FROM. Secondly we will see the positive aspect of A double culture and then we will see the negative aspect of A double culture.
The multiculturalism in Britain is due dû to GREAT BRITAIN 'S history. In XIX siècle(là vous savez le dire!), Great Britain built an coLONIAL EMPIRE IN Asia mainly IN India. Nowadays, there IS still the British influence in countrIES like Bangladesh or India. This situation can explain the strong migration that England has undergoNE. Indeed, A LARGE part of immigrantS whO live in England are from Asia that is India asiatique c’est-a-dire, Indiens et cetera (???)ARE FROM INDIA .
In class we have studied a document which is a table with the origins of the British immigration from 1951 to 2011. In 1951, one 152 thousand Polish people against 111 thousand people who are immigrated in England; and in 2011, 579 thousand Polish people against 694 thousand people who is immigrated in England.je ne comprends pas votre idée.... the Indian community increased though the years and reached a high point in 2011, becoming the most important immigration in Britain. Perhaps the number increases because of the indolence of India.(oulala faites attention !)Renseignez -vous SOIGNEUSEMENT SUR CE QUI A POUSSE LES INDIENS A IMMIGRER !!!
TheRE IS a picture (that’s here) which illustrateS perfectly the multiculturalism in England. In this picture we can see a brutish-(se relire!)asians couple with a fish and chips, in front of a fast food. The women is wearing a traditional DRESS. In this picture, they are blending the British culture with the asianINDIAN culture. The fact that the woman IS dressed WITH a traditional DRESS and IS having fish and chips that is the national dish, represents a double culture. Indeed, Britain breed several cultures; especially the Asian(à revoir svp) culture. In class we had studied a document which is an interview between a journalist and a woman called Fatima. Fatima has(!!) IS 28 years old and she is teacher. FatimaWAS born in Birmingham, where she lives nowadays. Her parents came from Bangladesh. First, it was her father who came TO Britain to work, to have a better life and better way of life; and after her mother immigrated. Britain and Bangladesh have a good link because of the colony.(ATTENTION) For Fatima, having a double culture is a blessing for her (beaucoup de répétitions:à éviter)because she gets the best of both worlds.
In this multiculturalism, they are a positive aspect double cultures bring a certain wealth and benefits. In fact, have a double culture enables us, to be tolerant towards of the other and have a larger knowledge. Having a double culture involves to be bilingual. despite that many people find that it’s really well to having a double culture.
The movie Bend it like Beckham dealing with the integration and adaptation of people coming from foreign country. This movie highlight un aspect plus dépréciatif de la double culture. in fact, the movie bend it like Beckham talk about the situation of a young asian-brutish, named Jasminder, who is a huge fan of the David Beckham and hopes that one day she will be able to become a professional footballer and play for her country. But, their parent are orthodox sick and have have other ideas for the future. in fact, for them Jasminder is expected as a woman to be married and maternal. the director Guinder Chada uses different techniques which illustrated the conflict of culture, such as accent in voice, contraste, stereotypes, sarcasm and characterization. In class we have a also studied a document which is website article presenting a testimony about the identity crisis that British-Asians encounter. the author suggests that they have difficulties to involve themselves in the culture of their country of origin. They have to celebrate their parent’s counties and to attend traditional anemones because they insist on their cultural heritage. She mention the wares integration and adaptation.
To conclude, we can say that England is absolute cosmopolitan country, where the British-Asian are integrated to British society. We can also say, that double cultures is a blessing because this double culture bring a avantage to fulfillment giving (en donnant) the best of both world. But, having a double cultures can be destabilizing for a part of Bristish-Asians because the tradition of parents collide with the lifestyle of the land where they lives. So, there are a good and bad sideS in the multiculturalism, it’s necessary maybe to take just the best for TO live well
Vous devez vous relire avec soin avant de poster une "notion" :vérifier des terme : "indolent" , "sick" , des "s" qui sont absents ou trop présents....J'ai vu que vous aviez une autre notion , il faudrait la relire avec soin d'abord, elle aussi
J'ai le sentiment que vous n'allez pas au fond des choses: vous ne parlez pas du ressenti des Anglais "de pure souche" par rapport à cette population, à aucun moment le mot Commonwealth n'apparaît :or il faut que vous connaissiez ces notions.
OK ?
hassna31
Bonjour fidji45,
Merci beaucoup d'avoir pris de votre temps pour me dire ce qui n'allait pas dans ma notion. J'ai pris compte de vos remarques très constructives, MERCI encore :)
Bonjour, Fidji45
Voila j'ai pris compte de vos remarques est j'ai corrigé mes erreurs. J'aimerai toutefois savoir s'il y'a des erreurs qui persiste Merci d'avance.
Spaces and exchanges:
I'm going to talk about the notion of Spaces and exchanges. First, I will give a definition of the notion of spaces and exchanges. The different spaces of the world are nowadays more and more connected to each other. The exchanges take many forms: people, trade, information .I will illustrated this notion troughs examples of multiculturalism in Great Britain by taking the examples of British people who have Pakistani or Bangladeshi origins.. I would like to speak about asians integration in Great Britain. British-Asians are people that come from India, Pakistan and Bangladesh and who reside in the United Kingdom.
First we will see the multicultural dimension and see where it takes its roots from. Secondly we will see the positive aspect of A double culture and then we will see the negative aspect of a double culture.
Multiculturalism in Britain is due to great Britain’s history. In the XIX century, Great Britain built a colonial empire in Asia mainly in India. Nowadays, there is still the British influence in countries like Bangladesh or India. This situation can explain the strong migration that England has undergone. Indeed, a large part of immigrants who live in England are from India.
In class we have studied a document which is a table with the origins of the British immigration from 1951 to 2011. In 2011, they were 1176 Pakistan and Indian people who immigrated to England. the Pakistan and Indian community have increased through the years and reached a high point in 2011, becoming the most important immigration in Britain. The number of the Indian population in England increasing because the living conditions are more difficult. In fact they are racial inequalities (muslims/hindou), the sexism and especially the cast system who are not in favor to the poor (poor/rich). I think that it is a mix of all that pushes the Indian to immigrate to England.
This immigration can also have a link with the Commonwealth that is an organisation which is composed of 53 countries among which, India.
Through this organisation the countries are to bind by the language, the culture and they have a privileged link between them.
There is a picture (that’s here) which illustrates perfectly the multiculturalism in England. In this picture we can see a British-Asians couple with a fish and chips, in front of a fast food. The woman is wearing a traditional dress. In this picture, they are blending the British culture with the Indian culture. The fact that the woman is dressed with a traditional dress and is having fish and chips that is the national dish, represents a double culture. Indeed, Britain is composed of several cultures; especially the Indian culture.
In class we have studied a document which is an interview between a journalist and a woman called Fatima. Fatima is 28 years old and she is a teacher. Fatima was born in Birmingham, where she lives nowadays. Her parents come from Bangladesh. First, it was her father who came to Britain to work, to have a better life and better way of life; and after her mother immigrated. Bangladesh is part of commonwealth and and in a past Bangladesh was colonized by England so Bangladesh has to keep the language. The colonization of Bangladesh by England can explain the immigration of Bangladeshi in Great Britain.
For Fatima, having a double culture is blessing because she gets the best of both worlds.
In this multiculturalism, they are positive aspect double cultures that bring a certain wealth and benefits
. In fact, having a double culture enables us to be tolerant towards the others and have a larger knowledge. Having a double culture involves to be bilingual. Despite that many people find that it’s really well to have a double culture.
The movie Bend it like Beckham deal with the integration and adaptation of people coming from foreign countries. This movie highlight an aspect more deprecatory of double culture. In fact, the movie bend it like Beckham dealing with the situation of a young British-Asians, named Jasminder, who is a huge fan of David Beckham and hopes that one day she will be able to become a professional footballer and play for her country. But, his parents are orthodox sicks and conservative and have other ideas for the future. In fact, for them Jasminder is expected as a woman to be married and maternal. The director Guinder Chada uses different techniques which illustrates the conflict of culture, such as their accents in their voices, contrast, stereotypes, sarcasm and characterization. In class we have also studied a document which is an website article presenting a testimony about the identity crisis that British-Asians encounter. The author suggests that they have difficulties to involve themselves in the culture of their country of origin. They have to celebrate their parent’s countries and to attend traditional anemones because they insist on their cultural heritage.
To conclude, we can say that England is absolutely a cosmopolitan country, where the British-Asian are integrated to a British society. We can also say, that double cultures is blessing because this double culture brings a advantage to fulfillment giving the best of both worlds. But, having a double culture can be destabilizing for a part of British-Asians because the tradition of parents collide with the lifestyle of the land where they live. So, there are good and bad sideS in the multiculturalism, it’s necessary maybe to take just the best to live well.
